Blog #12- Reflection on Scene

The strengths of my scene are:

1. My scene is full of suspence.
2. My scene has good character interaction.

The weaknesses of my scene are:

1. That I need to characterize my main character more.
2. That I need to remember that one of my characters is the father of the main character.

If I had time to re-write the scene, I would:

1. Characterize my protagonist more.
2. Elaborate on my characters' thoughts.